Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Reasons by Aishah Kazman

This poem is dedicated to my one and only 'owl'. I hope you like this :)

Dear you,

I love the way
you care.

I love the way
we can talk about everything and anything.

I love the way
when we argue, we could scream, shout and laugh all in the same minute.

I love the way
you use weird sentences without you meant too. You are just a guy with few words.

I love the way
you look at me when I'm ranting on some random stuff.

I love the way
you roll you eyes when I said something that annoys you or anything that does not make sense.

I love the way
you laugh.

I love the way
you would envy guys that I spoke about. You never told me this, but I know.

I love the way
you would tell me everything.

I love you, with all your flaws and strength.


**Another one-shot poem I did. Not edited, just something that comes straight from heart. I am not sure if it fits the whole poem writing standards, but I have seen quite a few modern poems that uses the same style ( list writing ) and I figure why don't I give it a try. It's a two line per stanza, with a final line in the end. I'm not sure of the first line fits the whole poem, but it just feels right to include that.

Comments are critiques are most welcome :)

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